Heroes

Responding to Denise at Girlie on the Edge blog with the prompt word RANGE: https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2022/12/04/sundays-six-sentence-story-word-prompt-239/

The old man settled in his chair on the porch marveling at the beauty of the sunset and listened to the cicadas trill their strident mating call, he closed his eyes and recalled his youth.

His childhood heroes, Kit Carson, Hopalong Cassidy, Gene Autrey, Roy Rogers, the cowboys of the old west flooded his imagination as they tried to outshoot the bad guys, and he could see Davy Crockett, king of the wild frontier with his musket and his coonskin hat.

He remembered emulating his heroes running through the bushes his cap gun ready to shoot those mean, ugly, skulking outlaws, or raising his wooden knife ‘old faithful’ ready to take down any grizzly that dared step in his path.

He was happy that the cowboys were now making a comeback with the screenwriting of Taylor Sheridan and his shows Yellowstone and 1883, though sadly these shows were strictly for adult viewing and not for children.

As the sun started to set below the horizon he imagined he saw Roy Rogers astride his horse Trigger galloping into the sunset and he began humming softly to himself ” happy trails to you until we meet again, happy trails to you keep smilen’ until then”.

His wife came out on the porch noticing the old man was sleeping, “come inside you old coot, it’s getting cold out here”, and she shook his shoulder, but he never heard her voice or felt her touch because he was riding the range with his heroes in Heaven.

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30 thoughts on “Heroes”

      1. oh i would, too. it’s peaceful and it has a sense of contentment that you had done what you needed to, so you are granted a grand yet subtle exit.

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  1. Absolutely beautiful and nostalgic story-telling, Len. Amazing use of the prompt. So heartwarming with the memories it brought to mind and the old man that was a young boy singing Happy Trails again.

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      1. I like and still watch Bonanza (loved Hoss), High Chaparral, and Big Valley…the only western with a matriarch and not a patriarch. The Rifleman is on in reruns and I watch it occasionally. Dr Quinn Medicine Woman is a fav of mine as well. Remember Grizzly Adam? I wish they would rerun that show.

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  2. A wonderful story. What a nice way to go, reminiscing! And I liked the walk through his childhood even “as the sun started to set” — great foreshadowing, and the reader almost, not quite, anticipates what’s coming, not entirely surprised. This is the kind of gently-told story that truly satisfies on all counts.

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  3. It is a surprise ending, isn’t it? I mean the guy just go to heaven with his old faithful knife, horse, his gun etc., leaving a woman who loves him heartbroken. Actually I often thought about it whenever I watched wild wild west movies. It is very unsafe for men, even worse for women, and the uncertainty is really really very high…

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