Creatures of the Night

Responding to Denises’s Six Sentence Story prompt ” paste” https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2023/01/15/sundays-six-sentence-story-word-prompt-245/

The old man tumbled out of bed, the screams of his grandson ringing in his ears, as he fumbled to light the candle and stagger down the corridor to his grandson’s room.

Hurrying through the open door, he enfolded his whimpering grandson in his arms. whispering words of comfort, soothing his brow, making the evils of the night gradually recede to the shadows.

He lay with his grandson throughout the night, keeping watch, ensuring the child slept soundly with no more night visitors disturbing his rest.

The grandfather arose before the sun and searched for his book of herbal remedies rifling through the pages till he came upon the correct recipe for the night terrors attacking his grandson.

After breakfast the grandfather showed his grandson how to select and mix the ingredients until a thick paste was formed, nodding with satisfaction at the results, he proceeded to apply the paste to his grandson’s face and body covering the bites and scratches incurred the previous night.

That night the grandfather slathered more of the thick paste on his grandson’s body, knowing the boy would have to endure one more night of agony, for the paste was not only a cure but deadly to the faerie creatures from the bottom of the garden, who tormented the boy at night.

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31 thoughts on “Creatures of the Night

    1. Thanks, Nick. I was away for eight days visiting family, and we had to escape our small town because we were hit with 70 cm of snow over Christmas and all the roads were closed. Then my wife and I received an unexpected present from the grandkids and came back sick with some bug that lasted for three weeks. But back to normal now, whatever that is.

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  1. Hey! Excellent Six!

    You managed a neat trick, imo, with the story, kind of a double back on the old ‘and they woke up and it was all a dream’ plot meme. Where as a Reader, I was thinking, ok, bad dreams, kindly grandfather… then, only at the end it became a first aid/self-defense theme.
    lol
    cool

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  2. I really like this. The sweet, gentle, loving grandfather who was protecting his grandchild by knowingly killing others (even though they deserved a good killin’). Powerful imagery.

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  3. And this is exactly why you should never sleep without at least a sheet over you and NEVER let a limb hang off the edge of the bed!

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