
My granddaughter, Brianna, grade 12, and I converse daily on her English assignments. She’s writing a novella on pirates and an evil spirit. She has a poetry assignment and introduced me to Villanelle. I was intrigued and tried my third attempt at poetry in three years.
Earlier that day I had occasion to have words with an obnoxious neighbor who was blasting rap and heavy metal music from a radio, disturbing the quiet of the neighborhood. He’d consumed his fair share of alcohol, which didn’t help our discussion. Hence my topic for the Villanelle.
God of Peace sing your song Let your rhythm sooth my soul May we learn to get along So much in this world is wrong We dig ourselves a deeper hole God of peace sing your song May we learn to sing our song Make our being whole May we learn to get along What am I doing wrong That I always lose control God of Peace sing your song For peaceful yearnings I do long But living takes it’s toll May we learn to get along I hear the sounding of the gong That guides me to my goal God of Peace sing your song May we learn to get along
Amen! 🙏🏼
You’re very fortunate to have a granddaughter who is interested in writing. I have one of those, too; it’s a joy to see the work and follow their development. Enjoy this time with Brianna!
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Introducing you to this form of poetry paid off well. Neighbour take note!
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Amein! 🙏
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